Very nice. I enjoyed it. Great use of different scales and a good motif.
However, your fast playing is championing over your melodic playing. When you play slow, it almost sounds lifeless. And the use of the whammy makes it sound very dragging at some point, almost off beat.
I'd really make sure your melodic playing is strong, because the melody is very beautiful but with a weak attack and a weak vibrato it doesn't carry (to my ear as a listener) as well as the rest.
I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!