Very nice! That first bend is 1-1/2 steps - not easy to get for anyone. Still some things to clean up as far as timing, clean picking/fretting, etc. But you're getting the FEEL into it, and doing great. This is a tough one to nail, even though it doesn't sound super "hard." It's also a great study in note choices, phrasing, bends, etc. GOOD JOB!