my own song

i uploaded a video of this a while back. i've been struggling with ideas for this for a while (See more) now. this is the chorus going into the verse. was hoping i could get some feedback as to whether it actually works, sounds any good? or total rubbish and scrap it?

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Jen Hapke
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Jen Hapke I actually think that the transition works really well. Sounds awesome. I would love to hear a full song made out of this.
Jen Hapke
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Jen Hapke I think you will achieve it some day.
Richard O'connor
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Richard O'connor thanks jen! im still trying...still failing miserably lol
Israel Stefanello
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Israel Stefanello Uauuu great man!

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