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Ezequiel Romanko

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You have great stuff here bro! it sounds really great, maybe you can work on adding different layers of guitar for textures, for example the part before the solo you have a melody going on on the lead you can add a harmony on some point to add more content to it because since it repeats for a bunch of time you can play first maybe the half of the section with only one lead and then add another guitar doing a harmony to surprise the people listening. but keep working on this because you have a lot of great stuff here! this is gold pure gold don't doubt it! :)
 

Ezequiel Romanko

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As a fellow songrwitter i would recommend you dont be afraid to try all the craziest things that comes to your mind do different things and save them and the after a couple of days off of the song go back and listen to everything you did and you may have a new idea for adding to the mix, take your time in the creation process until YOU and only YOU are happy with the final result don't stop working on it until you feel everything is perfect, cause the most important factor of creating music it's that you enjoy what you created!
 
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Dustin Stevens

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I really enjoyed this!! Nice Groove, kept it interesting through the whole Thing. Maybe your lead on the chorus (?) Sounded a Bit weak Tone wise.

The Intro was a real Highlight! Would have loved If it Made a reappearance in the Song, maybe as a slow middle section? Either way, great Work! :)
Thanks man its really a rough draft. The drums are midi. I have a drummer but havent gotten around to recording real drums yet. As far as reimplementing the intro. I do like that idea i just would have to figure out where to put it. Thanks for your opinion
 
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Dustin Stevens

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You have great stuff here bro! it sounds really great, maybe you can work on adding different layers of guitar for textures, for example the part before the solo you have a melody going on on the lead you can add a harmony on some point to add more content to it because since it repeats for a bunch of time you can play first maybe the half of the section with only one lead and then add another guitar doing a harmony to surprise the people listening. but keep working on this because you have a lot of great stuff here! this is gold pure gold don't doubt it! :)
Thanks thats an interesting idea. I may try that.
 
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Dustin Stevens

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@Dustin Stevens I did't know what that link was but I just heard your song it's great. The intro like others said you should use more often and maybe not at the start. maybe like after a fast fart to reset the feel of the song? I heard 1 riff you could probably miss and possibly you could just rearrange the song, the samples are there. the volumes are good too, it's not like 1 is way too loud or something. Great work :D
you don't have to rearrange it, it is good just as it is too, so ya
Thanks for the input
 
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Dustin Stevens

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@Dustin Stevens the one called new song doubled guitars, the opening riff reminds me of an a7x riff :D I can't remember which one right now. I heard all the songs but I can't really say much now, my brain is just starting up, I woke up at 4:30 am :( Do you got Soundcloud? I think a few others got it too, maybe see you there. My SC is Cinder Gates if you want to add me,my stuffs not really metal atm but my couple friends are
I dont actually atm but when i get alittle more organized i may set one up lol
 
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